I look around and all i see are kids… Kids on iPads. It’s a shame that all the power in your brain is going to be wasted on a tablet with a light show. My mom and I like outside activities rather than becoming pale and computer addicted. My mom and I are going running today we will also jumprope and later on do Pilates. My mom teaches Pilates so I take her class sometimes. When we go running we run past the beach and the salty air stings my skin the sair and lack off oxygen sting my lungs but I don’t care. I’m running after all… I know what is going to happen so I ignore it and enjoy the time I pass by the ocean… I watch the sunset and savor the orange and pink light reflecting off the water and flashing in my eyes.

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