Mar
2014
March 4th my first blog
I look around and all i see are kids… Kids on iPads. It’s a shame that all the power in your brain is going to be wasted on a tablet with a light show. My mom and I like outside activities rather than becoming pale and computer addicted. My mom and I are going running today we will also jumprope and later on do Pilates. My mom teaches Pilates so I take her class sometimes. When we go running we run past the beach and the salty air stings my skin the sair and lack off oxygen sting my lungs but I don’t care. I’m running after all… I know what is going to happen so I ignore it and enjoy the time I pass by the ocean… I watch the sunset and savor the orange and pink light reflecting off the water and flashing in my eyes.
Can you break this up into two paragraphs?
mpandes01
March 10, 2014 at 1:01 am (10 years ago)I like the line that says, ”I watch the sunset and savor the orange and pink light reflecting off the water and flashing my eyes.”
stichclub
March 10, 2014 at 6:30 pm (10 years ago)thank you, i was trying to make something with the word flashy
bheusser
March 10, 2014 at 8:38 pm (10 years ago)Aren’t you on a electronic
nickoprather88beep
March 25, 2014 at 10:37 pm (10 years ago)Very good at putting descriptive words.